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Its not too bad,

It seems to be a little off at times but if you can fix that, I'm sure it will get a much better score! :D

Very creative!

I love th characters and the sytle of animation! The colors and everything fit so well! :)

Fion responds:

Thanks! I didn't really have much time on this so it's quality was pretty low. Realized it was due to be finished with about three hours to go and then procrastinated for 2 and a half hours.

Not too bad.

Its short and rather odd at points but its not a bad submission by far.

Nice work.

Awesome!

Thats gotta to be one of the best parody's to those commercials ever!

Keep up the good work!

Not bad.

Its a bit short but it has potential and if you put a little more work into it then I am sure it can turn out to be something good.

Sweet.

Its nice of you to do this and all but it does need to be animated and it does need a little more flavor to it.

All in all though, its a nice flash and I'm sure she is happy with it! ^^

Good.

It need some music and all but besides that this is pretty good for your first submission! :)

Not bad.

Animation is good and everything but it seems to be lacking in a real story. Thats the only thing I saw wrong with it but besides that, good job.

wynand responds:

thanx matey, yeah looking back on this piece its not really that planed out, story telling is probably my weak point =) working at it hehe =) thanx for the review

Not bad.

But it just and intro and doesn't really have a place here on Newgrounds by itself.

I look forward to seeing of your animations but make sure you attach a file of something along side the intro so it will be an actual flash.

Looking forward to seeing some of your work.

It need some work..

It need a story behind it to really bring it off its feet.

The animations aren't bad but are a bit fast for the animation and I think people would get a better idea of whats going on if they could see the flash a bit slower and have a story to follow along with.

ultrakiller666 responds:

the story was told in the trial, and you are certainly right about everything, so I'm gonna put the totarial back on so you'll be able to understand the actual story,

anyway, thanks 4 the review

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